
So, here's page one. I figure I'll just update them here when I finish them, then if you guys have any crit, I can fix them up before I post them anywhere else!
Um, so, words on this. I AM SO LAZY, AHAH. Yeah, just pretend those black things are, like, a mix of aliens and humans. I tried to make it obvious some weren't human? Oh, and one of the speech bubbles says "ze", 'cause that's the way to refer to, um, either someone who is both or neither gender, I forget. Either is applicable.
FINALLY A PAGE IS DONE. *tears of relief*